Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Bart Solarcyzk & Chen-ou Liu: Wednesday Haiku, #226

Photo by Walter A. Aue

going  back
    to say goodbye
     Bart Solarcyzk 

Photo by Vern

summer's end
my footprints in the sand
a little deeper

     Chen-ou Liu

 Photo by davebloggs007

tomorrow morning
a humdrum river beach again?
summer moon

trans. by David G. Lanoue


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Anonymous said...

I like the dizzying of tenses in and through each haiku.

Bart said...

Thanks Don. Caught this a week late. Always a pleasure.

P K Padhy said...

Chen has composed a beautiful haiku with zoko and karumi. The implied 'kireji' portrays a silent pause interweaving both the images and rendering aesthetic feeling.